Angelreader77

Hi there! This was a nice descriptive work and I liked it. Your describing skills are excellent. There seems to be a balance, keeping the entire thing from going over ...

Hi there! here to review! This is absolutely amazing. I loved the way you presented the story, the idea, the metaphor... it's all just awesome. Your idea was really really ...

Hi there! I rather liked this piece. It's amazing how you've conveyed so much of what was happening and the character's emotions in 3 paragraphs. It didn't feel to fast ...

Hi Teren! Welcome to YWS! This was an interesting piece. Like you said, this a bit different since you didn't elaborate the gender of the MC in the beginning and ...

Hey Vampire! This was awesome! I really liked how the story was from a mirror's point of view. Also, you kept it from the mirror, as in the mirror from ...

Hey there! This poem's good but I think it can get better. Your theme was good, very original. I liked how you portrayed it, as if the speaker was talking ...

Hi! ~Here to review~ 4 months of writers block? Yikes. Glad you got over it. Anyways, this poem's great. I like the theme and the way you presented it. Relating ...

Hey! ~Here to review.~ This piece was a bit long to review in one go and I'll come back to do the second chapter. People get put off by long ...

Hey there! ~here to review~ Hehe, I liked it. It was not really an expected ending. :) Also, I liked the name of the story. At first I thought it ...

Hey there! ~Here to review~ It's a nice story. I like the way you've presented the characters, showing how Ella feels about her family, giving the reader a general idea ...

Hey there! Here to review~ Nice prologue you've got there. I'm hoping you're continuing. ;) This is a great prologue. It has just enough suspense in it to keep the ...

Stars! Here to review~ The idea of this story was great. Lots of people here can relate to this story, as many of them were scared of the dark at ...

Hey! Here as you asked. :) It was an interesting piece. As the other two said, your descriptions were good, good enough for me to imagine. Your first paragraph was ...

Ash! You posted!

Hey Tiny! Sorry if it's a bit late, I got stuck in a few things. It was a nice piece, but truthfully I didn't see the story behind it. I ...