AngelaDangel

Overall it left me happy, disturbed and in anticipation for whats to come. The only thing that bothered me was the use of grammar. Such as when you said : ...

The more I read it, the more I start to get it. The way it's written is kind of odd, but that's not a bad thing! You have a different ...

I really like the wording you used! It emphasized the point; such as how you capitalized the H in her. I can relate to your feeling a lot, so this ...