Angela

I really like this story. The plot is good, and the characters are very believable. I wouldn't mind spending an afternoon with them. Please bear in mind that this is ...

What's this?! I really enjoy the first part of your story, come to read the second bit, and it's THAT SHORT?! What is the world coming to? I really like ...

A very good story. I like the plot (I consider it to be original, but I don't know what everyone else thinks), and your characters are very realistic. I hope ...

[quote="emilym1178"]As I walked down the hallowed halls of fourth floor Irvine Hall I heard music floating throughout the hall Try starting a new sentence here. it seemed to be coming ...

I think that this is a great story. There is a significant amount of potential. The story seems good. There is the occasional unnecessary word, but people already cleared that ...

This seemed like a really good story. I mostly enjoyed reading it. But I have to agree, Dede seems a little desperate. Crazy. Passionate is a nice way to sugarcoat ...

A very good poem. I think that it kinda seemed like the writing was a little desperate at times, especially at the end of the first stanza. Also, there were ...

Bound tight in thread, you sit morose, the world around you cast in blue. And there is naught but stillness. Then the music starts, tentative, reedy, just enough to make ...

I don't know fate works, but I do know it likes to be funny. I know that we went through three months of school before I even knew who you ...

I thought this was a very good story. I like how this is a flashback. I didn't find any thing wrong that glared at me like an angry grapefruit, but ...

A very good story. I really enjoyed it. I can't help but think that it is too short. Luke should have showed up again and your MC should have had ...

I do agree with wickedwonder: This chapter seemed to be just a filler. It's a lot shorter than the others, and it was kind of a let-down. I hope that ...

Love the story and can't wait for more! I love Damien already. Where I can I find one?? ;) I only have a younger brother, and he is a right ...

Loved the story! I the previous reviewer has pointed out one of my concerns. Also, I would like to add that at first glance as far as I know, the ...

I'm sorry, but I'm absolutely crap at reviewing right now, so this shall just be a warm-fuzzy-feeling review. As a friend. Loved it! This is a good plot, and I ...