AngelKnight900

This is a really interesting chapter and I can't wait to read more of your chapters. I'm very interested about this woman and this mysterious Starry Hill. This makes me ...

Ahhh!!!!! I am in love with your story. You might see me "reviewing" in basically all your peices of work. I love your dialogue. What I think you should've done ...

I'm suddenly of a fan of this story. I want to know who is this mysterious sea man and why is he so dangerous. This story is AWESOME!!! I'm going ...

This is actually a great chapter but it actually goes too fast because you really got my hooked on this. If you want to keep it this short then maybe ...

This is actually a good beginning. There are a few grammar mistakes that you need to look at but I'm fairly interested. I will be back for the whole chapter. ...

Well, first I want to say welcome to YWS. It's a really good community here and I'm sure you will like it. Okay....I'm not really up for nitpicking and whatnot ...

Well everything has already been said but so far....I'm really interested in what's going to happen next. I actually read your first chapter before I read the prologue which is ...

This is a great story and I did enjoy reading it. Now....I'm a half fan. I am a fan because I'm interested in what's going to happen next and I ...

First thing I will say....christian writers rock!!!! :D Hahaha couldn't resist. Yes....I would suggest you look over the beginning of the plot set up because there are some awkward sentences. ...

tell you the truth....some readers are not going to take your writing seriously. Some people might actually look down at it and think that it's some serious case of amateur ...

Ummmm...........wow I wasn't expecting that...and I'm sort of confused about your story here but okay. I'm not a fan....sorry to say and I try to be fans of a lot ...

This has got me thinking.....a lot. I'm not a fan of it but I think that's it well-written. I'm somewhat a little confused because there isn't much of a description ...

I really like this. You don't have any flaws in it which is good. What's also good (and this is good) but I could actually feel the pain that Levi ...

I really like this and it's not what I expected. That's a good thing. Some people like to be surprised and I could see by the length and context that ...

The little poem in the beginning of the chapter is actually a great start. So far, I'm interested in the story, but I would suggest rereading this chapter because I ...