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Re: Like concrete and lead
Thank you for the input! I don't really write poetry often so I don't really do the correct kind of format but yes I understand. It was a cute example ...
Mar 14, 2017 -
Re: Like concrete and lead
yeah, grief is really accurate, a long time friend has been changing and getting more angry and we're no longer friends. Thank you for the review! ^_^
Mar 14, 2017 -
Re: Glass soda and Marble bubbles
no no no, no harshness at all! In my opinion the only time a review is harsh is if you find no good things in a story. Thank you for ...
Feb 10, 2017 -
Re: Glass soda and Marble bubbles
thank you for the input! I tried to space out the dialouge actually but for some reason it didn't come out how it did when I published it, I do ...
Feb 8, 2017 -
Re: Merc with the mouth
thank you! I'm glad you thought it was good
Feb 7, 2017 -
Re: Neoptolemus Pyrrhus
I love you so much for writing this, this is amazing! Can I show it to my english teacher, if it's alright with you? she loves these kinds of poems.
Feb 7, 2017 -
Re: Merc with the mouth
thank you for the input! I'm not that good at writing sentiment to be honest but I hope to do better on it the future
Feb 6, 2017 -
Re: Merc with the mouth
thank you, Shima! I was hoping it didn't sound too annoying like I was 7 with a crush.
Feb 6, 2017 -
Re: Dear Stupid Blank Page
wow, I really needed to read this actually, it made me laugh a little. I've been going through some writers block and this poem really brightened me up. The last ...
Feb 5, 2017 -
Re: Coin
Hi, JayJane! I'm new here too so welcome! I like how you wrote this, it felt very nice and I like how the coin went from place to place; new ...
Feb 3, 2017 -
Re: Coin
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Feb 3, 2017
Hi, JayJane! I'm new here too so welcome! I like how you wrote this, it felt very nice and I like how the coin went from place to place; new ... -
Re: color
I like the imagery it gives, it sounds like a distant dream that's hard to find. sorry if it isn't a good review, beautiful poem
Feb 2, 2017 -
Re: color
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Feb 2, 2017
I like the imagery it gives, it sounds like a distant dream that's hard to find. sorry if it isn't a good review, beautiful poem
