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Andromeda

  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Journal of All Things Little [1]

    Hello Lauren! I'm Andromeda- here to critique your piece. Let's get on with it, shall we? :D Yeah, I said, cos somebody invented perfume. I like that you used perfume, ...

    Jun 1, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Studio.

    Hi! I'm Andromeda, and I'll be critiquing your work today. ^^ The room it opened to was a memento in itself. Her drawings lined every inch of every wall, dying ...

    Jun 1, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Mama's all that matters.

    Hello! I'm Andromeda, here to review. :) The smell of burning wood fills the little girls [there should be an apostrophe after 'l' in 'girls' to make it look like ...

    Jun 1, 2009
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Lavender Napkin Rings

    Hello, Hannah! I'm Andromeda, here to critique your work today! “Should the napkins be lavender [there should be a comma here.] or this baby blue?” She holds the napkins up, ...

    Jun 1, 2009


Patience is the strength of the weak, impatience is the weakness of the strong.
— Immanuel Kant, Philosopher