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This is really great. :-) 07. Casting Lines -- Jack's Mannequin 08. Land Locked Blues -- Bright Eyes Definitely some of my favorite songs.

Hello, Kenzie here again. First of all, you improved from your previous version quite a lot. Expecially on the dialogue, it's a lot more realistic this time a round, you ...

Hi I'm Kenzie, and I'll be reviewing this today. :) First of all, I think you have an interesting plot, that could be expanded well. Anyway, the first part, you ...

Hi smile, I'm Kenzie and I'll be reviewing this today. By the way, welcome to YWS! Hope you have a great time writing with us. :smt001 First of all, the ...

Hi I'm Kenzie. : ) First of all, I think this start has a lot of potential, but could use a tad bit work. As Jellybean said, this doesn't really ...

Hi I'm Kenzie! Welcome to YWS! :smt003 First of all I think that when you're dealing with a serious topic like that, you have to address it properly. I think ...

I'm pretty sure contests are supposed to go under the 'Contests' section. Just scroll over the 'Contests' tab and click on 'Create Contest' so you can make this into an ...

Hi I'm Kenzie and I'll be reviewing your lovely poem today. ^-^ First of all, I think that this is pretty good, I love the idea of it, however, I ...

Hi I'm Kenzie. ^-^ First of all, I liked it. However I felt that in a lot of places you just dumped all the information at once. To the keep ...