Anaïs

I agree with Ms. Leja - this definitely reminded me of the Jabberwock. It's a fun little piece, and the way you play with imagery is amusing and aesthetically pleasant ...

I have to agree with Mr. Jiggity - this is a crazy awesome poem! Your images are incredible and so vividly evocative, and the very words seem drenched in the ...

You've got a few good images here - I really love 'I am a song in minor key,' which is crazy evocative and tells the reader so much about the ...

You've got some really good material here, Ms. Lynn - it's just a little rambly. You say it's spur of the moment, so that's to be expected. Your images are ...

Karmic points right off the bat for using the word "vivisect." It's a wonderful one, i'n it? I must agree with Mr. Bellamy above: I can't find much of anything ...

I like the concept behind this; it might function better as an abstract, maybe even stream-of-consciousness short story or piece of flash fiction. My only real criticism is of the ...