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Re: box-woman
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Jun 1
You have a spectacular gift for capturing intense, conversational grief. This piece feels like a private journal entry that suddenly turns into a ghost story. The way you blend everyday ... -
Re: fawn
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Jun 1
Oh, this is absolutely breathtaking. You should be incredibly proud of this piece. Personifying "Avoidance" as a toxic, tragic lover is a brilliant concept, and you executed it with so ... -
Re: till the very end
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May 21
I thin this poem is beautiful in its own sorrowful, yet grim so here are my pointers!! What I personally think you nailed at= The personification is masterclass level. Giving ... -
Re: Tesseract
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May 21
I honestly love the eerie, mind-bending vibe you’ve captured here. You have a real gift for making a reader stop and think, and that final line gave me actual chills. ... -
Re: caw, caw
This poem was EXTRAORDINARY and very fascinating to read!! And here's my why... The way you start off your poem you don't try to start with a calmer presence to ...
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Re: The Waves
I love how each word you put in runs in deep, making us think, even rethink past choices or past mistakes. This short poem has such deep words and emotion ...
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Re: to god I pray for all your lovers
I adore this poem in my opinion, and here's why... 1st) You don't need to try and build up to hit the right emotion your reaching for in the audience, ...
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Re: In the strangeness of the cave
I love how you added Gacha in the mix to vision how the characters look and I find that SUPER cool, as a retired Gacha kid. I ADORE how you ...
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Re: Room 214- Chapter 2! ;More YA content and much shorter :(
HOLY MOLY I just came back for part two of you book and I LOVE the plot twists turning me left and right its beautifully fantastic, and your writing? PERFECT ...
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Re: Rain...?
I love the way you describe your sorrow, I personally find it amazing how well you write, it has such an inspiring touch too it and not just that but ...
May 19
