Anamel

This is relatable in a kind of a weird way, it reminds me of the times where you might be reminiscing or thinking about stuff while you're looking at the ...

Oops I need to make it more clear he was imagining all that stuff about the cities and the building and the women lol

Thank you for the suggestions! I will definitely apply these, thank you

Thanks for pointing those things out, I think with the first one I might have edited and didn't realize I had left a previous description in there already lol I'll ...

Thank you so much! This made me really happy to read and definitely gives me more inspiration to finish this until the end. I actually just finished re - editing ...

Thanks, I'm really surprised you actually read multiple chapters instead of one. I'm actually working on re- editing again and just touched up chapter one. Just finished chapter seven and ...

It%u2019s meaning that roses look like they%u2019re painted in blood and they have thorny stems which are dangerous yet they are often considered as one of the most beautiful flowers

Thank you :)

I agree, I couldn't think of a good name lol

thank you

dope ill try and remember lol

Yeah that's a smart move to test the waters first

Hey, I just saw this review. I really appreciate what you have said and I have often noticed my writing is not too clear so hopefully from expanding on what ...

And this is coming from someone who can't even spell simple words, much less use periods. I can see why you don't understand it... lol.

But I would like to know what parts or what scenes need more exposition if you don't mind telling me