AnNguyenLe

Thanks so much :) These reviews are very helpful and will certainly help my writing which is the whole point. I'll try to improve as much as I can.

To be honest, this story scares me. Then again it's the story and stories supposed to be like that. i feel the story lack a few "detail" and i have ...

A true story with a happy ending huh. Anyways, I love how you express your feelings and describe the events in parts. Even though it's not detailed, it's enough for ...

The story was interesting. You describe his actions well and made a unique character. However, it showed run on sentences, grammar mistakes, as well as few spelling errors. Also it ...

Hmm..everything is perfect so far, however you left me hanging. Did Robyn found her perfume yet or is that going to happen later?