AmyJade

hey! the passage is short, but i get a good idea about whats happened before hand. i would like to know what made her say no, to marrying him, please ...

hey! i love this song, and i love how you have interpreted it. what you've wrote actually matches the song really well, maybe you caould write a few chapters about ...

i love the idea of the woman in her dreams at the start of the chapter, maybe you could describe a bit more what she was like, what she was ...

i love how its really simple but effective! its a great opener and i want to read more!! i liked the first four statements, it sets the scene perfectly: I’ll ...