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Re: Writers block
Wow, Bond! I liked this a lot. I really, really liked the ending. The whole story I could picture perfectly, I also could relate to the character. (Because I love ...
Jan 21, 2010 -
Re: Vampyre's Horror
Hey! Your writing style, I love it! Haha. Anyways just adding a little bit more too Jasmine's review: You should change up your vampires. Make 'em original. Only because everyone ...
Jan 21, 2010 -
Re: Determined: The Story of A Beautiful Jew. Chapter One.
I really liked your story! I liked the detail you gave and I have a question. Is this going to be a novel or a short story? Cause I have ...
Jan 21, 2010 -
Re: Beast is Dead: Prolouge and Chapter 1
I liked the idea of bickering twins! But I might be over reading it. After reading it, the prologue seems kind of dark. Which I'm thinking it was supposed to ...
Jan 20, 2010 -
Re: That's So Edward
Hahaha I'm not really a fan of Twilight so this made me laugh my ass off! I love your movie title. "This is Just Another Disaster Movie Where Everyone Dies ...
Jan 20, 2010 -
Re: Chapter 1: Just The Beginning
Ok. This is my second review so.. Anyways I really like the story. I also love how you write about the darkness. You actually made the darkness descriptive, which is ...
Jan 20, 2010 -
Re: The Others
Hey this is my first review so.. Alright I loved the way you write and the detail you gave. I just had a few problems. Sentence and wording problems: I ...
Jan 20, 2010
