Amindor

Thanks so much for the review! The suggestions were definitely helpful.

Hi dbrick, Amindor here. Your poem is pretty deep and has a great flow. I may be new on here, but, of course, I still know a lot of things ...

That's just what I was looking for in this one. Imagery. Thanks.

Thanks, GrapeNerd. I really appreciate it. Also I'm glad to hear that you don't see any errors, because of the fact that it's one of the first things I wrote ...

Hi RavenLord, Amindor here. This short story is very detailed, containing a great perspective from the spectacular Death. I don't see any errors, and that's even better. It's wonderful.

Hi summerlove, Amindor here. I'm pretty new on here, so you probably haven't seen much of me anywhere on this site, but, of course, that's okay. Your poem is wonderful, ...