AmeliaDay

Hello! Okay. I see where you're going here. You're off to a good start. You said you had problems with the flow of everything? I was kind of confused in ...

Once again, I've been meaning to review this for you for FOREVER. This story you've got going here... It's probably one of my favorites. And I see you posted chapter ...

Oh goodness! You asked me to review ageeess ago! I'm sorry it took me so long. Alright, let's get down to bidnus. You know I love your writing. The beginning ...

Hi! I read this whenever you first posted it, and I told myself I would review it, and I've just now gotten to it, so YAY. This is literally one ...

Hello! This is so cute. I love how Carter just runs and hides behind Ellie. That made me smile at the adorableness and it was just hilarious that Ellie shoved ...

Can I just say that already I'm in love with this? Like, from the first paragraph it was like BAM I'm in. It really reminds me of Hunger Games and ...

THIS. I love this! When I read the title, I thought (stupidly) that you were writing to actual people. haha, I was pleasantly surprised. I do have a few questions? ...

Okay. First, I liked that you explained all the swimming terms, or I would have been totally CLUELESS. They were simply put, and that was easy to understand. Now, to ...

I literally knew I would love this from the FIRST SENTENCE. As soon as I read it, I was BAM in. And I love that romance is already drawn into ...

Okaay. What to say about this. Since I'm coming in on the ninth chapter, I'm a bit confused. I'm going to start off here with punctuation. Right now, I'll just ...

Oh Dear Lord do I know this. And can I say... I love it. This is truly great. I love, love, love the style that this is written. The dark ...

Hiii!!! I really, really, really love this. I love Kenna's relationship with Evan. It's absolutely ADORABLE. When I first started this, I wasn't sure I would like it (no offense). ...

This is phenomenal. I truly love this. I don't think I've really read much like this before. I feel like the last sentence is a little out of place. Like ...

The beginning really drew me in, but as I kept reading, I got a little bit confused. The back story, I feel could have been better explained. I'm American, but ...