AmeliaCogin

Hi! Just a quick review! I have to say, first of all, that I am NOT a fan of rhyming poetry. But that's just me lol. I do have to ...

Hi! I really enjoyed this piece. To me, it seemed more a poem than a song. Really well done! Your style is simplistic yet at the same time beautiful. Here's ...

Hi! first of all, I really loved this poem! I loved the innocence and the simplicity of the piece. Here's a nitpick! lol:) Some times ( put them together - ...

Hello! First of all welcome to Young writers society! Enjoy yourself, do plenty of reviews, and have fun! I presume this is your first piece so I'll go easy on ...

Hi! I'd like to tell you first off that I really enjoyed your piece. Aziraphale is very critical: he's given me a bad review too. DO NOT LET HIM STOP ...

Hi. I liked your poem very much. To be honest, I didn't really understand the purpose of the poem: the meaning behind it ect. I didn't really find any mistakes ...

Oh WOW! I loved this so much! I had tears in my eyes! your writing drew me in and I was jsut transfixed. I think you may want to edit ...

Hi! I think that this is a nice piece, not entirely original, but still decent. The line arrangement confused my a little. Im - use an apostrophe or preferably write ...

Hi there! I really enjoyed this piece. It's very lovely and innocent and I get a very fairytaleish vibe from it. I have to say, I didn't really have any ...

Hi, I've nothing left to say - jenthura did a brill review! I really enjoyed this piece. It was a really good read but you made quite a few gramatical ...

Hi! I enjoyed reading your story, and by "1" I presume you mean there's another? I'd love to read it if there is! Keep writing! I like your piece because ...

Hi! I really enjoyed your story. It was quite imaginative and descriptive. I loved the beginning - very mysterious. I also loved the blunt way to informed the reader of ...

Hi! I enjoyed this piece. I really got engrossed in the story and in the character of Alyssandra. Your writing is very descriptive and I felt the different parts of ...

Hi, I loved this piece. It was very stirring and emotive. I thought the last three stanza's were great, but the first could use some tweeking. For me, it didn't ...

Hi. I really loved the basic idea of this piece. It's got good substance, but could be structured a lot better. The first thing I noted about this poem: - ...