Young Writers Society

Hello Hayden! It feels like a lifetime since I've done a review! It's always a pleasure to review something of yours. I love your style of writing: it's very detailed ...

Hey Mac, how's it going? I'm here, as promised, to review for you. So let me starrt by congratulating you in how you've improved! You've really taken the constuctive critisism ...

Hi! I'm here to review, as requested! OK, so Iiked this. I really get what you were going for and I get that there was passion in your voice about ...

Hiya! I get here eventually! Sorry it's taken me a good few days to review! I'm soooooo busy with college; it's unbeliveable! I only just turned on my computer to ...

Hi, I'm here to review, as requested. I really enjoyed this poem. It was everything a poem should be; emotive, deep, passionate, with a hint of mystery. It gripped me ...

Hi, I'm Amelia, and I'll be reviewing for you today! So, here's what I thought: this was sweet. It had an air of beauty and innocence. It made my heart ...

Hi, JSon, I'm here to review for you today! So, I kind of get what you were going for here; you were trying to flaberghast your reader with an incredibly ...

Hello! I'm here to review for you today! I wouldn't describe this as "not very good" at all. It was pretty fantastic. The lines were short and pithy, but I ...

Oh I love this song! Rizzle kicks are uh-ma-zing ! I guess I get more of a feel for the story because I really love the song, but I'm going ...

Hiya Mac, how're you doing? Anyway, here's onto a review. This was a good chapter. It's not very polished around the edges, though. It's a bit slap-dash in places, as ...

I frankly haven't the time or patience to painstakingly smother every word with my thoughts and decipher the beautiful imagery. I just wanted to say that this was absolutely fabulous ...

Hiya Twit - I eventually get a review to you! Hopefully it'll have been worth waiting for! Okay, so you know I love this storyline that you've got going here. ...

You're such a great writer, jas! It's seriously like a pleasure having to review for you! I really felt as though you stepped it up a notch in this chapter. ...

Hiya! Finally, I have the time to get to a review for you! I know that you told me to review chapter 1, but you had loads of reviews already, ...

Okay, so I've commented on your style and technique, and your pacing and flow isn't an issue, so I'll get on with some nitpicks for you! Chloe, Dash " - ...