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  • Short Story » Horror, Spiritual
    Re: The Harrowing

    Hello Hayden! It feels like a lifetime since I've done a review! It's always a pleasure to review something of yours. I love your style of writing: it's very detailed ...

    Dec 11, 2012

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Mystery / Suspense
    Re: The Diamond Fist: Chapter 6

    Hey Mac, how's it going? I'm here, as promised, to review for you. So let me starrt by congratulating you in how you've improved! You've really taken the constuctive critisism ...

    Feb 6, 2012

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General
    Re: That's Strange

    Hi! I'm here to review, as requested! OK, so Iiked this. I really get what you were going for and I get that there was passion in your voice about ...

    Dec 6, 2011

  • Short Story » General, General
    Re: Listen carefully.

    Hiya! I get here eventually! Sorry it's taken me a good few days to review! I'm soooooo busy with college; it's unbeliveable! I only just turned on my computer to ...

    Nov 18, 2011

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General
    Re: There are no tears

    Hi, I'm here to review, as requested. I really enjoyed this poem. It was everything a poem should be; emotive, deep, passionate, with a hint of mystery. It gripped me ...

    Nov 8, 2011

  • Poetry » Lyrical, General
    Re: A Soft Spot for Me

    Hi, I'm Amelia, and I'll be reviewing for you today! So, here's what I thought: this was sweet. It had an air of beauty and innocence. It made my heart ...

    Nov 6, 2011

  • Short Story » General, General
    Re: Cataclysm

    Hi, JSon, I'm here to review for you today! So, I kind of get what you were going for here; you were trying to flaberghast your reader with an incredibly ...

    Nov 4, 2011

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General
    Re: Festering Burns

    Hello! I'm here to review for you today! I wouldn't describe this as "not very good" at all. It was pretty fantastic. The lines were short and pithy, but I ...

    Oct 10, 2011

  • Short Story » General, General
    Re: When I was a youngster

    Oh I love this song! Rizzle kicks are uh-ma-zing ! I guess I get more of a feel for the story because I really love the song, but I'm going ...

    Oct 8, 2011

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General
    Re: The Diamond Fist: Chapter 3

    Hiya Mac, how're you doing? Anyway, here's onto a review. This was a good chapter. It's not very polished around the edges, though. It's a bit slap-dash in places, as ...

    Sep 27, 2011

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General
    Re: Saxophones in Fall

    I frankly haven't the time or patience to painstakingly smother every word with my thoughts and decipher the beautiful imagery. I just wanted to say that this was absolutely fabulous ...

    Sep 26, 2011

  • Novel / Chapter » General, General
    Re: Serpent's Teeth [2]

    Hiya Twit - I eventually get a review to you! Hopefully it'll have been worth waiting for! Okay, so you know I love this storyline that you've got going here. ...

    Sep 25, 2011

  • Novel / Chapter » General, General
    Re: The Space Between Infinity- 2

    You're such a great writer, jas! It's seriously like a pleasure having to review for you! I really felt as though you stepped it up a notch in this chapter. ...

    Sep 17, 2011

  • Novel / Chapter » General, General
    Re: Fog - Part 2/10

    Hiya! Finally, I have the time to get to a review for you! I know that you told me to review chapter 1, but you had loads of reviews already, ...

    Sep 16, 2011

  • Novel / Chapter » General, General
    Re: The Space Between Infinity- 1.5

    Okay, so I've commented on your style and technique, and your pacing and flow isn't an issue, so I'll get on with some nitpicks for you! Chloe, Dash " - ...

    Sep 12, 2011


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