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Re: The Odd One Out.
Wow! You have a real talent for writing! Though I believe this is more of a metaphoric poem then a short story. ;) Anyway, I love the metaphor. It shows ...
May 21, 2012 -
Re: A Chemical Imbalance
I like it! Maybe you should make it longer though....
Apr 2, 2012 -
Re: Silent Orchastra
I like it! :) A few spelling/grammar mistakes, like "Gental" should be "Gentle" and "orchrastra" shouls be "orchestra." A few things don't make much sense.... "The cruel gental wind" is ...
Mar 5, 2012 -
Re: Clean up your own tears
I love it!! :D It's sweet! Slightly hard to follow though. Try to make your lines have more meaning- it seems like it's just because you want it to rhyme- ...
Mar 5, 2012