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Re: Dreams Come True
Thank you both. I will work on improving this poem more.
Jun 4, 2005 -
Re: In Wonderland (Chapters 1&2)
Yes, sorry for the really confusing chapters. I have started to fix the problems, and have also started a re-write. This time the characters know each other names in the ...
Jun 4, 2005 -
Re: Missing You
I like the rhyming pattern. I can definatly sence the feeling behind the words, but if you put a little more imagery into this it could be better.
May 26, 2005 -
Re: aquaphobia
The only critique I have is the mispelling of taste in line 5 of stanza 1. Otherwise I'd say this is very well written with a good amount of detail.
May 24, 2005