Alzora

“Screech!” screech shouldn't be in "'s The ear-splitting sound of mutilated metal and shattering glass reverberated throughout the estate, causing anyone within a few miles of the road to turn ...

Chapters 3, 4 and 5 for my novel Invisibles. Reviews please :D . Chapter 3: Blood is Thicker Than Water When I got to the house I parked the cart ...

This is a great poem!! I've never really been able to write poems so I think anyone who can is talented. The only thing I saw that is wrong with ...

I revised the prologue from my novel Invisibles. I will be posting the revised versions of the other four chapters. Tell me what you think . :D Prologue: I circled ...

Chapters 1 and 2 for Invisibles. Review Please :D Chapter 1: The Beginning My name is Idda Jones and I am a cop. I am fifteen and have a gift ...

This is a little confusing. How did she die? When you say 'hit the shower' it's a little awkward. Your grammar could be a little better, try to use spaces ...

Hi, this is scary, but I like it!! It's understandable!!! I think it needs a little more explanation about how it got to the point that it's at. Also, more ...

Hi, this story is cool. I loooove the way that you describe the hot air balloon. I don't really get why your main character wanted to go up in it ...

This is a really good story, I think it has potential.:D Your spaces aren't so great, try to (whenever you hit Enter or Return) make an actual space between words, ...