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AlyceParke

  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: new hope.

    I can totally imagine this to a beat with a lot of strings. if you added some more, like something to be used as verses, this could be an amazing ...

    Sep 17, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Broken - Prologue

    I think your imagery is really effective. In fact I love it that the stars chased the man away. it leaves a feeling of utmost loneliness and beauty, things that ...

    Sep 17, 2008


When she transformed into a butterfly, the caterpillars spoke not of her beauty, but of her weirdness. They wanted her to change back into what she always had been. But she had wings.
— Dean Jackson