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AlyTheBookworm

AlyTheBookworm

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Narrative Re: Dizzy

    You're welcome! I'm glad it helped. :)

    Aug 28, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Mystery / Suspense Re: Prologue to 'Unknown Title'

    You're welcome for the review! I guess I can believe that the woman would want to help, and no offense taken, but since I'm young wouldn't I be more innocent, ...

    Aug 28, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Fantasy Re: Luminous (Old Version)

    Thank-you SO much for this review Heath! This was extremely helpful because I thought somethings in the story were off, but I had no idea what the exact problem was. ...

    Aug 23, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Fantasy Re: Luminous (Old Version)

    Thank-you so much for the review! The period after 'well' was intentional because I wanted a little pause there, and the way I write dialogue is also just my style ...

    Aug 23, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Narrative Re: Poor, poor Theren

    You're welcome! :D

    Aug 23, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Fantasy Re: Luminous (Old Version)

    Thank for the review Lius! I will PM if I post the next chapter. :)

    Aug 23, 2016


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