AlyKat

I like the emotion in this. The main character is very well thought out and i like the whole concept of the 9/11 setting. Any changes I make (suggest) are ...

I just want to say that I really love the idea that this is how someone is made INTO a hell hound. I mean if you do write more i ...

Ok you're my new best friend :) I love when i find someone who writes the same emotion and type of pain I do. It's amazing

Ok so you're an amazing writer. I say that because this caught my attention enough that i turned the T.V off just to read :) Anything i make (suggest) a ...

Ok so I'm absolutely in love with the concept and and emotion that comes with this piece. It's amazing!! Any changes i make (SUGGEST!!) will be in blue Many stories, ...

Ok so I just want to start this out in the way that I love it!!! And i totally get it. A lot of my writing I don't get how ...

I love the story line to this. I'm currently in school so I can't comment to much but I will when i get home. I will read all of it ...

Ok so I'm going to be really honest... This is so beast!!! But yeah I'm gonna try and find what few mistakes you have. ANything I change will be in ...

Hi :D I'm Aly so I'll be reviewing for you today For, when that old and crotchety excuse for a religious leader comes about to inspect the Town and its ...

I love this story! The characters are a little plain but i love it!! It may seem strange that these two things should be together, after all, for Mothers to ...

I love your emotion in this!! Two softly painted parallel lines painted continuously. Try taking the second painted out or put a semi-colon. Now I’m drowning in that pool, it’s ...

Ohh my word....Found by Margaret Haddix We had to read it for battle of the books and the first chapter is horrid plus the characters bore me and the story ...

If you like all of those you should try cryptid hunters and the second one Tentacles. There's a lot of action and im sure you'd love it =) Also try ...

I love it!But it truly seems a little awkward...When you start of with the writing it confuses me a little but i do love the concept of the poem and ...

Hiyaz =) Im Aly and I'll review =) I like color so any mistakes i find will be in color The shambler gently rocked, almost lulling me to sleep, but ...