Altamash22

Dude I know what a prologue means...xD

Hehe... I'll definitely "show" you coffee next time! This story was just loosely based on an idea I got in school. Hadn't meant to post it but did it anyway. ...

Thanks, will do better in future.

No problem at all. As I said criticism is always welcome. Many mistakes, now that you have pointed out. Still newbie here. Will definitely try to avoid such mistakes in ...

Thanks a lot steampowered! Couple of mistakes yeahh.... Will try to improve next time. Appreciate the review . Thanks again

I loved it. Very beautifully written, and amazing attention to detail. Keep it up and continue writing!