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  • Lyrics » General, General Re: I Thought I Knew

    Thanks a lot! Yes, the chorus was supposed to be sad, just like you said. As for the second verse, I intentionally used the words "dream" as well as "once" ...

    Feb 16, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: An Insight Into A Teenager's Mind

    Thanks a lot! I am a teenager, being fifteen; I'll tell you what people think about being a teen You always think you're right, and when you get it wrong; ...

    Feb 4, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Untitled

    *sigh*. Still no comments.

    Feb 3, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: If I Were a Bumblebee

    You, my friend, make me laugh. Laugh, laugh and laugh. Same here! I totally love this poem, it put a smile on my face!

    Feb 2, 2011
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: 101 Things I Want to Do before I Die

    Wow.. I have an (almost) exact same list....though I had a few scientific wishes (e.g. find the secret of anti-matter or see visit the other nine scrunched-up dimensions... Nice, though!

    Jan 27, 2011
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: KILL (not SHOOT) the Messenger

    Thanks a lot, Nightgoddess!

    Jan 25, 2011
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: KILL (not SHOOT) the Messenger

    Sure...Thanks a lot!

    Jan 24, 2011
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: You're Gone

    I edited it a bit...

    Jan 24, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: His Mystery is My Destiny

    Isn't this supposed to be a romance?

    Jan 18, 2011
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: KILL (not SHOOT) the Messenger

    Thanks you two!

    Jan 18, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: An Insight Into A Teenager's Mind

    Thanks, all of you, this is actually my first poem that isn't written for a song! Thanks for your support! Maisoon P.S. I think you'll see some improvement in my ...

    Jan 13, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, General Re: Lilly Evans' diary 10

    Nice, but I think you've got the events mixed up a bit...

    Jan 12, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, General Re: Lilly Evans' Dairy 4

    Ha! Sliverin ! Love it ;) Keep up the good diary enteries!

    Jan 12, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: An Insight Into A Teenager's Mind

    Got it sorted!

    Jan 11, 2011
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, General Re: That's So Edward

    To Magnusbanefan13: Found a tiny spelling mistake. "Story" doesn't have an e in it. In British English, it does. Nice fan fic, very fresh. =)

    Jan 7, 2011


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