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Alpacalypse

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  • Poetry » General, Other Re: Unfair yet Fair, Our World in a Nutshell

    Hello friend! I'm going to review this! :) First stanza: For some of us We could equate it to hell. This line seemed a bit awkward. I feel like you ...

    Mar 11, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Suffocating

    I always love your poems! The things that I liked about this poem: -The rhyming is really simple and nice -you have some great images -It's not to short and ...

    Aug 20, 2013


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