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  • Short Story » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: Doubled Horror- Part 1

    Very good. It kept me on my toes. I like the way you said, "The bizarre structure was done in medieval style, with the pointed arches, tall towers and everything ...

    Oct 25, 2014
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: Doubled Horror- Part 1

    Very good. It kept me on my toes. I like the way you said, "The bizarre structure was done in medieval style, with the pointed arches, tall towers and everything ...

    Oct 25, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: The Secret....Chapter One

    thanks you for the review and feedback. I don't think I will be finishing this story because I tried writing on but there was just no future for this book. ...

    Oct 1, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: The Secret....Chapter One

    thanks you for the review and feedback. I don't think I will be finishing this story because I tried writing on but there was just no future for this book. ...

    Oct 1, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: The Secret....Chapter One

    thanks you for the review and feedback. I don't think I will be finishing this story because I tried writing on but there was just no future for this book. ...

    Oct 1, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Escaping The Kidnapper- Chapter 1

    Wow! That was amazing. I like the ending. It would be really cool if the man turned out to be a women in disguised. It seems like men are always ...

    Sep 30, 2014


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