-
Re: Cheap Entertainment
Hello, PurpleHeart! I'm Allie, I'll be reviewing your poem today! My thoughts/comments are in Red. My heart has been a toy for you A cheap entertainment at best So now ...
May 15, 2011 -
Re: Title Totally Unrealted To The Song
Hello, Wicked! I'm Allie, I'll be your reviewer today. My thoughs/comments are in Red. Smile pretty and hide the pain ‘Cause you’re not allowed to be down’, you say And ...
May 15, 2011 -
Re: Lost
hello! I'm Allie, and I'll be your reviewer today ^^ My thought's/comments are in Red. A distant gleam in the rippling waters Here I see, upon a steep, moss cliff ...
May 14, 2011 -
Re: My Dear Person
I absolutely love this! That's all I'm going to say, because, everything else has been covered! I has some trouble with this a while ago, and I eventually came to ...
May 14, 2011 -
Re: the journey
Hello Sudharsan! I'm Allie, and I'll be your reviewer today! My thoughts/comments are in red. Moving south on a windy day, Danger ' s mouth swirling astray, Danger's mouth can ...
May 14, 2011 -
Re: Life is a Kiss
Hey Crimsona! My name is Allie, and I'll be your reviewer today! Things that could be fixed/my thoughts are in Red. "Have fun!" My kiss blows from my lips to ...
May 14, 2011 -
Re: The Sun And the Moon
Hello! I'm Allie, and I'll be reviewing your poem today! So, I'll start off by saying that this was a lovely poem, and I enjoyed reading it. I'll show some ...
May 14, 2011
