AliyahPillage

This is a great poem.

I love the poem in general, And I ask again, What is it we’re fighting for? this was my favorite line even though I'm not sure why Keep up the ...

I love the simplicity of the poem, it was a great poem.

That was a very nice poem to read, I was kept from the first word to the last word. Great job.

I love this poem a lot you're a good writer.

I love your poem but I just wanted to let you know that a lot is two words. other than that great job on your poem.

I love this poem, it's AMAZING, I love all of your writing that I've read so far. Keep up the good work

I love the poem, my favorite stanza was the one about diamonds in the rough, it was a great poem, keep up the good work.

I like this but you went from using Collin the using Conner and that didn't make much sense. Great job other than that.

This is a really good song, I love it, nothing else to say.

I love the poem, it was full of suspense and made me want to read on GREAT job.

I love the poem, I especially love the line about the colorless rainbow, I don't know why that is my favorite line I guess that it doesn't make sense so ...

I loved the poem,it had an amazing ending, and this is how a lot people feel like everything good is just a dream.

I love this poem, it tells a nice story, I love it all so I couldn't tell you which was my favorite part. Keep up the good work.

I love how you kept it short, it is a very nice poem figurative lies from figurative foxesfogging up the window to the alley and the gun this was my ...