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AliciaTheAsian

  • Poetry » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Oh for the love of spring!

    Hello there! I liked this poem but it was hard to read for me. I understood but not everything flowed into one thing, in my opinion. I also suggest you ...

    Jul 1, 2012
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Mum's the Word

    I enjoyed reading this because it was absolutely adorable! On the writing aspect, I say you have a knack for those words! Not only your diction but the flawless transitioning ...

    Jul 1, 2012
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Narrative Re: it comes in waves

    Hello! I love your diction most of all in this poem but PixieStix is right. I didn't feel much of that when I was reading. It was like I was ...

    Jul 1, 2012


Remember: the plot is nothing more than footprints left in the snow after your characters have run by on their way to incredible destinations.
— Ray Bradbury