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Re: Dusk
I love this poem! So I'm not the only one who thinks night-time isn't that frightening. "The lord of the dark" line was my favorite out of this poem. I ...
Oct 25, 2019 -
Re: yet
I admit, when I saw this poem at first glance, I thought it was a poem on a haunted house. Every stanza of this work feels like the beginning of ...
Oct 25, 2019 -
Re: i don't know where i am
"I waited, and waited, to be filled." I can sense the despair and sadness in these three lines. The entire poem itself paints an image, to myself at least, of ...
Oct 25, 2019 -
Re: flowers 1.2
I can almost see the romantic longing present in this poem. What I found most interesting is that fact you refer to whatever has lead the speaker to fall in ...
Oct 25, 2019 -
Re: .
I can practically see Maggie_Doodle running about in front of me. She sounds just adorable, but it would be tough work cleaning up after her mess, wouldn't it? Still, I ...
Oct 25, 2019 -
Re: Read Between the Lines
This is such a positive poem. Anyone who reads this will feel cheered up. The only suggestions I have are replacing "big" with another word, and perhaps edit the syllable ...
Oct 25, 2019