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AliceFairfield

  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: Dusk

    I love this poem! So I'm not the only one who thinks night-time isn't that frightening. "The lord of the dark" line was my favorite out of this poem. I ...

    Oct 25, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: yet

    I admit, when I saw this poem at first glance, I thought it was a poem on a haunted house. Every stanza of this work feels like the beginning of ...

    Oct 25, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: i don't know where i am

    "I waited, and waited, to be filled." I can sense the despair and sadness in these three lines. The entire poem itself paints an image, to myself at least, of ...

    Oct 25, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: flowers 1.2

    I can almost see the romantic longing present in this poem. What I found most interesting is that fact you refer to whatever has lead the speaker to fall in ...

    Oct 25, 2019
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: .

    I can practically see Maggie_Doodle running about in front of me. She sounds just adorable, but it would be tough work cleaning up after her mess, wouldn't it? Still, I ...

    Oct 25, 2019
  • Poetry » Health, General Re: Read Between the Lines

    This is such a positive poem. Anyone who reads this will feel cheered up. The only suggestions I have are replacing "big" with another word, and perhaps edit the syllable ...

    Oct 25, 2019


What we do for ourselves dies with us. What we do for others and the world remains and is immortal.
— Albert Pines