Alice

omg they have am exert from Eclipse in the back of NEW MOON now. and if i could pull characters out of books, i'd pull edward out.

wow, not the reaction i was hoping for. This site really shows the differences in the ways people regard poems, this one actually made MadHatter sick when i had him ...

ok will do, but the next one will be posted in lyric poetry because thats where this was supposed to be

Bitter, hurt, pain, nice. Perhaps I like gore too much but I love the end. It just reminds me of a black widow. If you ever concidered changing your title ...

OKAY THIS IS NOW AN OUT OF DATE POST, I TURNED THE PAPER IN! WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

ooh i would add it but its due like tomorrow and its long enough, and you're lucky i live in the tiny town in michigan and haven't been further away ...

Denouement are you from ireland?

who was James Joyce excatly?

This is just general stuff, not a way to pick a fight with you. More a way to alert you to the fact that I'm feeling that way again.

Hey everybody i copied this off word so i'm sorry if it confuses people!

Wow, that was... interesting. And as a matter of fact very true. Everyday the same rutine. No wonder people go insane, they're stuck in a rut!

ok i ignored the rest of the posts but i read hitc. and all i say besides the typo DONT CHANGE IT!!! i want to know what happens next!! post ...

WOW! that was good, dont add any more it would make it seem forced and the flow would stop. i'm not very good at criticing people, but that was good.

that was cool, a little depressing but most serious good poems r either good or depressing, and i have just one question what kind of book did she find?