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IIINNNNNNSSSAAAANNIITTTYYY. Hahahaha! Blpblpblpblbpblblp :P (this is an onomatopoeia of the raspberry). Alfred here, still crazy! (: Hi Jackie! I simply love poems and stories which are based on lette

Hi Lumi, isn't it bright tonight! I like your work, Contrition in a-minor. I think this is because it was said in a very cool and handsome way. You didn't ...

Heellooooo out there! Let me introduce myself, I'm Al, and I like giving Quick Critiques! Concept & Theme : :D :D :D :D Yup, there are a lot of lucky ...

Hi Snick! It's Al again for a revue! Well I really love the overall concept of your work. I easily understood the theme it exemplifies and the message you want ...

Hiya! It's me again! Al for my Quick Critique! Concept & Theme : :D :D :D :D :? You made a poem out of personal experience, but this cannot only ...

There are many people who like to critique stuff, including me. I think that's what art is about: perspective over something unperceived. And I think a second opinion for other ...

Hiya, I don't give review in these types of articles since, well, it's because of the sincerity of the speakers. And I think you, Snowberry, is a lucky person. Well ...

Wow! A poem written in stone! Ooohh. Hi I'm Al, and since I love stones and oddly colored birds, I'll give your poem a review! Concept & Theme : :D ...

Yes, we are liars, aren't we? Hiya, Al here! So your lyrics...they're great actually. Finely made. The strong language, although I don't believe in their purpose, still made an emotional ...

TV!!!! THERE'S A TV FOR CHICKEN'S SAKE! Ok, ok, breathe, breathe. *inhale*, *exhale*. Ok! I'm fine now. Let me give you my Quick Critique! Concept & Theme : :D :D ...

Hi Jackie! Al here for a Quick Critique! We all love our grandmothers don't we? We'll I for one do. When I talk to my gran-gran, I feel definitely at ...

There're cats, now there're dogs, what kind of Pet Shop are they running here anyway? Hahaha kidding . Now, everyone has these writer's blocks y'know, and I'm proud to say ...

For starters, I think you would read Gregory McGuire and Terry Pratchett books. Almost all of their works are based on magical worlds. They're not that scary but there are ...

I Like this, I really, really Like this. You're right about what you said, love is eternity. I think that you did greatly in this here poem because you made ...

Ha! The in-laws, huh? Wonder when I'd be getting one? About your story: the best thing that I liked is the concrete humor. It seems that you didn't actually try ...