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Thank you so much megan17 for your appreciation! I'm really glad to hear I'm not alone out there with this type of feeling too. That's really touching.

I really love your suggestions on how to change math to numbers or something like the pythagorean theorem. I used math because I'm a math tutor and it's something I ...

Oh, and yes. I purposely broke my punctuation down into nothing including a lack of capitals. I did it for a symbolic reason.

Interesting. The poem is written from the point of view of someone who is being told by a doctor that they're sick. So really what you're seeing is first it's ...

What I mean by predictable is when I started reading the fic and it was about someone who was advancing on someone else romantically, I could assume that it was ...

Thanks Outvaders!

o= 4 years later

xD I am feeling pretty lovey with your voice in poetry right now.

Oh! I really like that theme. Try writing it with just a single metaphor rather than dreams as a metaphor, and maps as a metaphor, just use one thing that's ...

I used to do the soul thing back in high school, but eventually I grew a new one and that's dedicated to a certain spirit fox that doesn't exist.

Thank you for mentioning it! I appreciate your feedback.

XD Unfortunately it was outmatched. If you want to see the winners go check out the Poetry Contest in the Contest forum.

I'm glad I could clarify!

If we look at "At Christmas, my mother drank too much wine and acted distraught all day, arguing with my father and rejecting her food. I missed my sister so ...

Thanks for the review!