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Hello BrittanyNicole, I'm Aley here to review your poem. It is interesting to take the perspective of the mirror instead of the perspective of the person looking at it. I ...

Hey Niraco, Aley here to review. This was cute. It made me chuckle when I read it the first time, but it would have been better if you could actually ...

Hey, Aley here for another installment of what I think about this so far. I apologize for these getting short. I've already told you most of the things I think. ...

I was kind of skeptical at first about this being a religious poem because it starts out with "The angel" as a complete line. To me that says that the ...

Hi. I'm jumping in cold so I'm really impressed at how easy this is to follow. Although I couldn't repeat the names of any of these people, or their classes, ...

Hey Purple, I like this poem. It flows very well and the message is clear and available to the readers easily. More over, this poem was able to reach out ...

Hello, Aley here to review. So I'm a little confused about all of the different references. Some of them seem to contradict themselves. For instance, you say that there is ...

Hi ConverseFireGirl Aley here for a quick review. I really loved this poem for the most part. It sort of fell apart for me when you stopped talking about the ...

Hi Purple, Here to point out some basic things about the poem and to review in general. First thing first, I'm just going to say you missed an O in ...

Hi Ulala, Aley here again. First thing first, we're back to a lot of names again. Please, please, refrain from introducing too many names if we're never going to need ...

Hi Boe, My name is Aley and I'm here to give you a review. To start out with, I really think that this has some great potential. The story kept ...

So I am kind of annoyed that you keep naming things in Japanese at this point. I can understand you're adding some flavor to it by crossing languages but you're ...

his eyes gave off the aura that he always was certain of what to do Describing something as an aura is really unhelpful for everyone who hasn't seen or experienced ...

In the beginning, there was nothing but fire . Flames burst from the grandest of mountains like serpents of fiery rage, lashing out for the cooler air so as to ...

Hey megsug! You know I love you. For me this poem is kind of a mind bend. I really love this line: "I got that from an English class." My ...