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Re: Prakfura Raiders: Chapter Three: Part One
Yo. So a few quick things and some longer ones. I found two words that were misspelled just by reading through it, so I marked those. There may or may ...
May 29, 2014 -
Re: If You Want to See Sappy...
Hey Audy, So um, I got this one for my exchange >.> I liked it. I mean, really there's not that much to say. I like the way you went ...
May 27, 2014 -
Re: The Five Stages of Rejection
Hey Hecate! Aley here for Review Day and the Poetry Exchange Typically my poetry exchange reviews are rather lengthy and specific because I like to do them line by line, ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: Things Change.
Hello Weymouth, This is Aley to give you a review. I think this is our first interaction. I think this poem really has some nice qualities to it. You've kept ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: Bubble dreams
Hey! Aley here for the second part of the exchange. First I'd like to explain why I didn't review your other poem. I really didn't see much of a change ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: The Rite of Spring
Hey Magpie
May 24, 2014 -
Re: Castor's Tale Chapter 2 Part 1 - Traveler's Tavern Is a Riot
There were too young lasses cleaning off the table with dirty rags. Wrong "to" To go to the store is too much of a shame just to by two gallons ...
May 22, 2014 -
Re: Castor's Tale Chapter 1 Part 2 - The Dispute
Hey! Back again
May 22, 2014 -
Re: Castor's Tale Chapter 1 Part 1 - Breakfast at the Inn
Hey! I'm not much of a story reviewer, so I'll make this rather focused. Here are some grammar errors that you should look at. “Get up Castor, Jeric needs your ...
May 22, 2014 -
Re: The Mind
Hello, I'm here because I keep seeing you around and I stalked your profile. ^^ I saw this only had one review so I figured I would get it out ...
May 22, 2014 -
Re: My Vacation
Hey Chance!~ Aley here to review. First thing first, if you're wondering how to format your poetry on YWS to get all the lines all nice and pretty, here's a ...
May 21, 2014 -
Re: gelatin heart
This is definitely all about the sounds huh? Ok, let's see here. Ten line poem. Considering this seems to be more about the sounds than the symbols or the message, ...
May 13, 2014 -
Re: A Graduate's Frustration
Hey! Nice to see you around again. You do have some good things going on in this poem. For one, it's edging closer to an individual experience that other people ...
May 13, 2014 -
Re: Just Like The Clouds
Hello! My name's Aley and I'll be your, reviewer, today XD. First thing always first, the sandwich top bun. I really think that you've got an excellent way with words. ...
May 13, 2014 -
Re: The Drive Home
Hey, here for the sudo-exchange. I'm just going to put up a few things so it's easier for you to see what lines I'm talking about. 1 He had an ...
May 12, 2014
