Aley

Hello Joellover! I'd like to say that I may not understand all of the idioms, so if I am encouraging you to change something that sounds perfectly natural to you, ...

Hey! I'm here for a couple reasons, first, I keep seeing your reviews around the place that are all analytical. You get a lot more out of poems than I ...

Yo! You said to be gentle so I'm going to praise you a lot and then do what I typically do. =D You really do deserve some praise for this. ...

Hey! I would like to say that while this poem has some definite deficiencies, you are starting a good path for narrative poetry. There is a story here and it's ...

I'm going to ignore the lack of paragraphs considering it was probably a technical error. So let's move on to some other things. Even though no one had bothered to ...

Hi tinny, Nice to meet you. You actually don't need that much help in terms of writing poetry it seems. This is a good poem. You have taken something that's ...

Hello, I happen to be a pretty big fan of the sing along songs so I know what you're talking about with those, and to be honest, they aren't really ...

Hey, I was actually unaware she died. She will be sorely missed. I suppose, moving on, I think you've had a good attempt at catching the idea of an eulogy, ...

Hey! Aley here. I really like the twist ending. For a long time while I was reading this poem I was trying to piece out exactly what sort of thing ...

I think for the most part the change in point of view is good. You have a few lines that could use some work since the point of view changed, ...

Hey Magpie! I'm here to fill in for one of the reviews you didn't get DX So I really like this poem, but we can find ways to improve it. ...

This is a much smaller poem so I likewise have a proportionately less amount of nitpicks. For the most part And I cried, seeing them upside: losing hope, starting to ...

I'm not going to give you my opinion yet ^.- just the technical stuff. Of the never ending pit of quiet that bubbles with memories that simmer and stir. Threatening ...

Hey Hecate, As prescribed I am here to do the requested review. First off I'd like to say that I appreciate you using the same metaphor throughout the poem. That's ...

Hey Peg, I'm going to mark down any lines I feel are useless because this poem seems to be a bit long and you can either incorporate them into the ...