Aley

Dreamy, what in the world did I just read? Okay, so you've known me long enough I'm just going to jump straight into what I thought. Uhh, hello! That make ...

Hello! Aley here to review. I think this is a good example of a poem that's taken on a life of it's own. Through the poem I can see the ...

Hello~ Considering this is a "work" and works need reviews, I'm here to give you a friendly critique on the art. I think you have a really good idea here ...

Hey Writer~ I'm sorry about your poem not ending up with a review in the exchange. I'm here with Skorlir to help get you the reviews you wanted. Overall I ...

Hey magpie~! First off I'd like to say that I love how you worked with the voice of the river and the voice of the person in the typology. That's ...

Hello LordGreenLeaf, Aley here. I think right now this poem stands very well on it's own. It's a strong poem with a strong message, and a clear meaning. There isn't ...

Hello Dreamwalker! Aley here. I actually like how you have the poem broken up into more stanzas than lines. I think it lends well to the more stream-of-consciousness flow of ...

Hey Verse! Aley here to review. As a really huge fan of poetry, I was sort of expecting a poem. To me this falls better under the 'other' category since ...

Hey Kyll

Hello~ Aley here to review! First thing first, I'd like to say that you've developed a clear beat with this rhyme. You've gotten the flow down and keep it through ...

Hey Tigga~ I think you've got an interesting image here that's very realistic in the way that your main character is using the music to drown out the surrounding life. ...

Hey Scarlet~ As requested I'm here to give you a review. As I believe this is the first poem of yours I review, I'd like to request that you note ...

Hello~ You're getting better every time you post one of these. I really like this one. You're exploring alliteration and multisylabic words that might not have much connotation behind them, ...

Yo! So I really liked this chapter. It introduced us to the book man himself, and we got a little more detail about this mythical house. Honestly, I think you ...

Hello! This poem really is something that's pretty unique. I think you can go pretty far with it if you give some more soul to the character, just enough that ...