AlexandraD

In the second stanza, perhaps you could say, "I see nothing," to throw out the use of a double negative! (: Honestly, though, I am not one who should offer ...

Kevin, I think you may have missed what I was trying to say. I meant, how would Austin get to class on time? The commotion in the hallway was probably ...

You're welcome. I know a little bit of constructive criticism can go a long way, so I always try to give people the advice I'd hope they would give me. ...

I think this poem lacks some emotion and feeling to get the point across. Sometimes simplicity is better. In my opinion, the simplicity shows how numb and emotionless you feel ...

I was somewhat confused as I read this, but I was able to piece it together with just a small amount of effort. I do think it's a bit disorganized, ...