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Re: Red Butler Prologue (NaNoWriMo)
Especially for fanfiction, this is really well-written. I don't totally know why it was in italics, and I'll admit I was half expecting them to end (so when they didn't ...
Dec 30, 2018 -
Re: It Happened in the Middle of the Night.
This is ABSOLUTELY INCREDIBLE. The language is vivid, concise, perfectly chosen. Your pacing is incredible. I felt riveted by the poem, unable to physically move. The poem just had an ...
Dec 30, 2018 -
Re: The Midwinter King, A Fairy Story
Overall, I liked this very much. It was certainly intriguing and your voice as a writer is clearly developed. Your descriptions are vivid yet not overly detailed; for instance, the ...
Dec 30, 2018 -
Re: Story of You: (A Ballad)
This is really, really great. I like the flow of it, and even though I'm not very familiar with meters, I think it comes across as very intentional in its ...
Dec 30, 2018