AlexT

Oooh very mysterious! Before we get going, I have something to say--my name is Alex and I have blonde hair. Oh, the irony. Anyway, let me get started. First off, ...

Haha when I read the first bit, I instantly thought of Peter Pan and the Lost Boys. Anyway... The first paragraph was perhaps the thing that caught my attention the ...

Mmmm...I really enjoyed the poem! It had a nice, breezy feel to it. It was well paced as well, and with a satisfying end. I must was indeed well titled. ...

I like it! Maybe a little bit overboard on the language, but still, I like it! The song really puts things into perspective-- the emotions the girl was feeling. All ...

I must say..the topic is what really caught my attention. The steady bounce of rhymes enticed me as well. I thought what you put into the poem was meaningful--there were ...

Short and sweet. It hand a nice bouncing rhyme to it, which I really enjoyed. I'm usually not much a poetry type of person, but I must say...this was really ...

Two words...awesome beginning! I loved the overall idea of the story -- an approaching enemy tribe. Actually, I just love the idea of elves in general. The way you arranged ...

I love this! It has a mysterious feel to it, and it took a little while to understand what was really going on. But-as the story progressed, things became more ...