AlexNoelle

Thanks once again! Yeah, I really don't have a problem with people that, as you say, "go to town" when criticising authors. As long as it's constructive rather than offensive. ...

There, I took that part out.

Thanks for the review, it was very helpful! I would've liked to add a lot of the things you mentioned and a few of those points did cross my mind, ...

Oh yeah you're totally right! I completely forgot about that, duh! I was reading the information out of my textbook and that's what it said...

I want to add quickly that I would've liked to add more feeling to this essay, I feel very strongly on this subject and I am very passionate about ending ...

np :)

Yes, I found your review very helpful, thank you!

Cool, have fun!

haha XD Ah yes I see that now, thank you :)

Thank you for the review! (and for being nice) I'm very glad you could relate to it, I have a hard time steping back and seeing a clear picture of ...

Thank you so much for the review and the compliments! Yes, I have trouble with flow and some of it is rap-like (if that's a term) It was kind of ...

I'm glad it was informative, and I will definitely take your advice into account. Thank you very much for the review!

Same, and Panic!

No problem! I'm glad it was helpful, okay so there are only a few that confused me... 1 "They were slowly pulling me out of the fire as continued to ...

both. XD I love TOP.