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Re: Alone in the Dark: prolouge and chap.1
Good story so far. Though some parts I don't entirely agree with but I don't dislike them enough to bring them up. All I can say is I saw a ...
Dec 3, 2008 -
Re: Shadow Box Prologue
I see everything pointed out so I will just give my opinion on your prologue. I have to say you get better more into the story and so that works ...
Dec 3, 2008 -
Re: THEM- Chapter one
Hi there Kevzta, I have to say, this is a good piece of writing. I only picked up on a few mistakes. The thing that got me was the storyline ...
Dec 2, 2008