Aleleekhall

Hey, thanks for the review. I will definitely work on my writing style but there were a couple of things that you told me to change but I can't. The ...

alright, I revised it. I did originally seperate the paragraphs every four lines but it didn't save when I posted it

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Sorry about that, it was originally poetry but after I revised it, it wasn't anymore.

Yeah, I noticed after I reread it. Is there any way to change it?

Thanks for the review, I am definitely going to review my grammar. I wasn't sure if poems should still have commas at the end of the lines when I was ...

Thank you for the review. I have actually been thinking of changing a few more things as well but wanted to know how to improve before rewriting many parts of ...

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This is great so far. It is extremely interesting and has just the right amount of detail. The only problem that I have seen so far are minor grammar issues, ...

This is great so far. It is extremely interesting and has just the right amount of detail. The only problem that I have seen so far are minor grammar issues, ...