Alchemist

Thanks for the review! I'm not native english speaker, and we dont capitalize I so it's hard to get used to.. and about I'm, i think i was just lazy. ...

Hey, it was just a joke, you can go all out! Thanks for reading it, as i stated, i only just threw it on the 'paper' all in once, i ...

Yes, i think that makes it. You pointed out that he strongly decided he has to remain calm,strong or whatever, until he goes through this! I think its much better ...

Sorry if i was a bit harsh xD Im dont think his reaction and thoughts would be boring, i mean, every normal person would freak out at least. But im ...

You are really on a good way to make something unique. Yeah i agree about mono and Nebes. But you should give us the insight on physical looks of Mangians. ...

Thanks, im so glad you liked it! Yeah, it actually came to me that at the first glance maybe i havent explained where he actually was, and that is on ...

Thank you for a nice reivew! Noelle just pointed out about the first sentence and i got it, i will rework it as soon as im free. I kinda though ...

Hey there, thanks for your reveiw! Now that you pointed that 1st sentence out, i see that i havent necessariy made clear what i thought, and i will think about ...

Thank you, my friend! I couldnt see it any different than a compliment! Quite few of your assumptions of symbolism were correct, tho the others will certanly make me think ...

Asgard is cool, as long as its not a coincidence. But hey, this is a writers society, not an everyday life, people here are smart. :) I think i already ...

Precisely, in the large text in the italics there was talk about down there in the comments. But its allright, i didnt notice 2nd draft and i will read it ...