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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Last Breath of Fire, Chapter 2

    Ohhhhhhhhh... So he actually comes from reality? Becouse you chose Asgard as the name of your capital, i assumed the world was made up and that you chose Henry just ...

    May 7, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Science Re: The spark of creation

    Hello there! I have to tell you that i really like this story concept. Its rather original for a fantasy genre (as far as im into it, and id say ...

    May 7, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Last Breath of Fire Chapter 1 Draft 2

    I just ran through this draft, it is really nice. I see that you worked about that big chunk of itallics that were confusing in the previous text, so its ...

    May 7, 2014
  • Short Story » Horror, Other Re: It's Me. Your Greatest Friend.

    Hey there! I just started wandering the place and wasnt sure what will i stumble upon, but this, my friend, is stunning. You made Fear come to life to me, ...

    May 7, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Last Breath of Fire Chapter 1 Draft 1

    Hey there again, i see that you have made an explanation about Asgard in the comments! You are not wasting your time, dont you? Whatever happened there just made me ...

    May 6, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Last Breath of Fire, Prologue

    Hello! This is my first review so u might want not to take me very seriously. I really like the style of yours. Im also a fellow fantasy lover. On ...

    May 6, 2014


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