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Ah, thank you for reading it! Part of the reason the first two lines seem a bit rushed is because I actually thought up the last two lines first, and ...

Thank you! This is extremely helpful. One of the challenges with this is that I'm trying to keep the AAAB rhyme set, so I apologize if certifying words are bland. ...

Thank you! I'm glad it sparked some emotions.

Thank you! The 'To My Freeze' represents the 'address' of the white grapefruit juice

Thank you so much! IThis poem is actually the situation I'm currently facing at my house xD. I'm glad you liked it! I combined a few lines, but do you ...

Thank you! I added those editing suggestions.

Thank you so much!

Thank you! I will definitely edit that. I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Thank you! I agree, the last line is very choppy. I've been thinking about taking out the 'very' but I don't know. The thing about the stranded words is that ...

I liked this. It was very interesting, and I want to find the answer s to all the questions this left with me. I thought that sometimes, though, the story ...

This is an amazing piece!