Alarainya

WOW. That was amazing. I couldn't understand it, and that is what made it great. There was such feeling that everything that I couldn't understand had a meaning and everything ...

I liked it, but I don't really think it makes sense...If some strange guy walked by my house and said he didn't remember his name I wouldn't exactly say, "Hey ...

Very good, I have just one problem. She says, "Her big brown eyes would stop me right on the spot." Well thinking of them would too, right? If she didn't ...

Creepy, but too creepy for the begining. I know she is going to go to the party, its obvious. Thats the problem, if somebody said that to me I'd be ...

Good job! It was very descriptive. I just wanted to say that you do get kinda confused with the dog knowing about humans, and then being seemingly confused about what ...

I liked it, its a bit choppy, but very cool. It was different, and kind of creepy. Just watch out for punctuation. I have to mention this, but I was ...

I liked this. It wasn't really a story, story, it was more of how someone might explain themself. I kinda write like that when I write in my journal. The ...

This chapter was ok. I have to say it was a bit......Noninformational. I don't know, but somehow this chapter wasn't as interesting as the others. I'm not quite sure why, ...

YAY YAY YAY! MORE ISAAC!!!! Sorry, but I really do like him! The only problem I have with this chapter is Carmen pushing her towards Isaac. I can definately say ...

ISAAAC!!! YAY! So, I loved that chapter. The words bonder and bondee are a bit weird, but other that that I absolutely, completely loved it. I like how she is ...

YAY! CARMEN IS GONE! (I don't know why, but I can't stand him, I think it was because of when he was mean to her in the begining.) Anyway, I ...

RAWR!!! WHERE IS ISAAC!!!! I WANT TO HEAR ABOUT HIM, NOT STUPID CARMEN!!! (sorry I already like him and I want him back) Now that I'm done with my little ...

I liked this chapter too, but I felt like there wasn't enough. She talks to Philip, Rebecca gets angry, and then she leaves, talks to her friend, then dreams, and ...

I liked it a lot, but I thought the begining of school thing was a lot like Twilight too. It was good though. Just be careful not to use "but" ...

I liked the last stanza too, it actually took me by suprise. I thought that the person was angry. Like, "you just listen to rumors, and don't even bother to ...