Alainna

Hey there MissMorose. If you'd like to discuss Breaking Dawn than you may want to check out this thread as it has many replies to it already and you're more ...

Again, another well written piece. To answer your question, I think you're better off writing in past tense. It's easier to make mistakes when writing in present tense and personally, ...

Hey there, Sarah. To begin, I'd like to say that I found this gripping as a start to a story. I'm now thinking of several interesting questions - 'why isn't ...

First off, I’m sorry that it has taken so long. Second, I have not read the critiques of others so please don’t shoot me when I start to sound repetitive. ...

The Book Thief is well thought out, creative and completely absorbing. At first I thought that I might struggle with the style of writing, but I fell in love with ...

Hey there, I don't really know the story of The Little Mermaid so bare with me. First off, I think this works really well if it is aimed at a ...

Hey there. I can see this being a two or three part story - like you said it didn't turn out as a 'stand-alone' piece. I really liked the storyline ...

Hey Stella Thomas. To be honest I'm just going to mostly echo what the others have said and put in a few of my own points. First off, this was ...

I read it last year. In a day. In France. In the searing heat, when i should have been at the beach. Snap. I read it two years ago by ...

I have very mixed emotions over How I Live Now. I borrowed it from the library a while ago now and at the time I was both addicted to it ...

Heya, I'm sorry that this is so late and took so long. First off, this was much better than part two. You still lacked a few things but it flowed ...

Hey, hey! Here for part two.... First off, this part seemed a lot more rushed than the first part. It was like everyone suddenly got up and left and then ...

Hey Jen, First off this is a very good piece. There were only a few things that I could pin-point and to be fair most of what I'm going to ...

Right, I'm here and ready to get cracking. First off, I did like this. I was a bit sceptical when I saw that it was meant to be a horror ...

Hey there. I have to tell you something - when I saw the title of this piece and first started reading I thought 'Not another sci-fi story set in the ...