Alainna

This is the first part of a story I have been working on. It's only rated PG-13 because it deals with mature themes. Hope you enjoy, feel free to crit. ...

Continuation. Feel free to crit!! Part 2 The next day I woke at six thirty, just as the spring sun was rising. I sat by my dressing table, riffling through ...

Thank you to those who have critiqued Part 1 and 2. Suggestions have been taken aboard. Please feel free to crit. Enjoy. Lyla. Part 3. “What?” I felt mum wrap ...

This is part 4. Crit is loved!!!! The bell at the end of the day couldn’t have been more welcome. Sarah and I pushed our way through the crowed corridor ...

Crit is drastically needed at the moment!!! So...here's part 5. Enjoy. Lyla. Part 5. I heard the door close at six o’clock and I knew that my father was home. ...

Part six finally, it's taken a while. Crit welcomed! Enjoy.. Lyla. Part 6. I walked up to the counter and waited for M to finish serving his customer. M was ...

Well, sorry for the usual wait...hopefully when school ends next month I'll have more time to write and it won't take me so long to post....So, hope you enjoy, crit ...

Right, this section is smaller than usual. Thanks for past crits. Enjoy. Lyla will not be posted after this one for around 6 weeks. Sorry!!! I was walking bare foot ...

Sorry for the usual wait. Please comment on whether this is an improvement on part 8 which was....horrendous. Thanks. _______________________________________ That night I lay on the sofa in front of ...

Swearing towards the end Please check out my section under the Writers Corner as I need some help!! And thank you as always for all the loyal crits!! _____________________________________________ Tom&

Sorry for the wait- technical problems and masses of homework! Crits welcomed! ____ Lyla. Part 11. A swarm of gnats was visible in the orange glow coming from the sensor ...

The usual apology for time. I feel like there's something missing from this part. Enjoy anyways! _____________________ Lyla. Part 12 I awoke sweating and gasping for breath. “What’s wrong?” My ...

Sorry it's taken so long. Swearing towards the end. Thank you in advance!! _______________________ Lyla. Part 13. I kept my head down as I hurried into the warm, coffee scented ...

Please feel free to crit!! Thanks. Sorry if the spacing is a bit odd. ____ Lyla. Part 14. “She’s staring again.” Mum sighed heavily and briefly glanced up from the ...

I'm soo sorry for the wait...........GCSE's and all. Please feel free to rip to shreds, the beginning is not as strong as it should be. * Lyla. Part 15. I ...

First of all, I'm sorry about how long it's taken to get this part up. Now, to re-cap what's happened: Tom went back home and left Lyla no real answers ...